User talk:Jelome1989

Writing

Hi, thanks for adding the Regional Coin locations. In the future, though, please try to avoid the "strategy guide" style of writing usually found on walkthrough sites; that includes second-person writing (using the word "you"; referring directly to the reader), informal language, and strategies and recommendations like "beating the boss first before hunting these coins." As this is an encyclopedia, it should be kept informative. Thanks, and keep contributing. Mario JC 07:41, 6 November 2017 (EST)

Thank you for the edits, got some idea now how to write the correct way. English is not my first language to I learned a lot from your edits. Don't know how to actually reply to you as this is my first time using / contributing to a wiki page so if you can read this please tell me how. Thanks again