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==== Removal of opposes ====
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#{{User|TasteTheFiresOfHelp}} As much as I love Bobby this article is fairly short, which is why it is getting my oppose vote.
#{{User|TasteTheFiresOfHelp}} As much as I love Bobby this article is fairly short, which is why it is getting my oppose vote.
#{{User|Wikiboy10}} This article is way too short. I never played the game and I am fairly neutral on this getting passed but the length is what kills it. [http://index.php?title=Special:LongPages&limit=1000&offset=0 The top 1,000 articles don't include this article.]


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Revision as of 15:29, August 12, 2021

Bob-omb (Paper Mario: The Origami King)

This article, in my eyes, is in pretty good condition. The opening paragraph is great, there are sections on his background and overall history, a recently added personality section, and plenty of images in the gallery and trivia. All in all, it seems like everything is there for a page on an ally in a Paper Mario game. However, if there are any objections or comments on this article, I can add them as soon as possible.

Support

  1. The Mansion (talk) Per reasoning above.

Oppose

Removal of opposes

  1. TasteTheFiresOfHelp (talk) As much as I love Bobby this article is fairly short, which is why it is getting my oppose vote.
  2. Wikiboy10 (talk) This article is way too short. I never played the game and I am fairly neutral on this getting passed but the length is what kills it. The top 1,000 articles don't include this article.

Comments

I still think the images of his backstory would be better suited for the gallery section. Bowser Nightwicked Bowser Bowser emblem from Mario Kart 8 13:35, July 30, 2021 (EDT)

It'd be a good idea to describe his interactions with Olivia under the personality section. Also, I find it a bit repetitive to end each flashback image with "in his flashback." I think the article could also use a few more quotes, most importantly the long one before his death. Scrooge200 (talk) PMCS Mustard Cafe Sign.png 14:59, July 30, 2021 (EDT)

Not sure about this one. I think this one skedaddles the length requirement a bit too much for my liking; it doesn't comfortably pass the grade for me. Keep in mind, I know that Krunch is featured too but honestly, had I been active then, I would have opposed its nomination for the same reasons. BabyLuigiFire.png Ray Trace(T|C) 11:41, August 2, 2021 (EDT)

I understand. I can add some memorable quotes, maybe add a section to general information on his purposes in battle. Lady Bow from Paper Mario. Green Star Lady Bow from Paper Mario. 12:24, August 2, 2021 (EDT)